Character description

Leaning his head on his knees, worn out shoes and ripped clothing. Bullys ran past the lights with laughter and shouting.there were tears going down his red cheeks it was like two rainfalls. he was in a dark hallway and worried to see what would happen next.He heard rats crawling through the hall.He stayed in the hallway because he was petrified of the bullys and stayed there for hours

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4 thoughts on “Character description”

  1. Could you use some connectives to help ‘show’ more about how you character is feeling. For example
    He heard rats crawling through the hall but stayed in the hallway because he was petrified of the bullys, so he stayed there for hours

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  2. wow i really liked how you describe your character and the bit with the worn out shoes that just made me supprised can you please inprove about describing the hallway

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