my literacy character description.

She was bursting with happiness and scrunched her hands and and was read a as a tomato and smile.She was so excited and was bursting and jumping up and down like a bunny and thinking,what is going to happen in my holiday.

 

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  1. If you got rid of all of the SHE WAS does it become more show than tell?
    Bursting with happiness and scrunched her hands, read a as a tomato and smile. So excited, bursting and jumping up and down like a bunny and thinking,what is going to happen in my holiday.

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