What we done in english

Hello today the year 6 cLass has done some english. Im gonna show you what we have done!

In english we had to write an emotive languageĀ  for a charater description. So each tables have there own target sa to use. My table target was 1.Fronted adverbial 2.Relitive Clause and 3.brackets 4.3 actions sentence

We had to use the same name as Miss Murphy idea witch was corol Ocean.

My fav bit in english is when we got to use are targets to level up the words well thats it for now baii.

 

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One thought on “What we done in english”

  1. You have done a good explanation of what we did in English but you have made some mistakes.
    “We had to use the same name as Miss Murphy idea witch was corol Ocean.”
    In this sentence you have made some mistakes. Firstly, you should have said Miss Murphy’s idea. This apostrophe shows possession.
    Secondly, the “witch” you have used is not the right one. That is the wicked witch. The correct one would be which. This “which” is a relative pronoun.
    I hope you are happy with my comment.

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