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…There was a white light facing Katie. She tried blocking the light with her hand. It worked. She looked around. It was blank silence , until she heard what it sounded like footsteps. But they weren’t just any type of footsteps. They were a giant’s footsteps. She peered, with her hand still on her eyes. Katie suddenly ducked from a strange , dark figure which glided  over her head . The moment when she looked up, her mouth dropped. She saw what it looked like a robot giant. Katie has never seen one before in her life but she has heard of them. She couldn’t believe her eyes. The giant was one second away from stepping on the poor girl when she heard the old lady’s voice that she traded her hover board for the magic remote control.

” Click the red button to stop time NOW ! ” shrieked the old lady.

Katie then did as she was told as quick as she could.

Click

Time immediately stopped.

” The way to the secret door is that way, ” spoke the old lady, pointing to her right.

Katie then started walking slowly but steadily to her right , until at one point, she found herself in front of a huge door. She opened the door – her eyes twinkled. She was speechless. The room was absolutely filled with gold. She took as much as she could but in the process , she didn’t realize she was pressing the green button (which unfreezes time). The giant turns around and immediately sees Katie.

” MY GOOOOOOLD !!!! ” yelled the giant.

” Come, this way, jump, NOW ! ” shrieked the old lady.

Katie jumped back through the vortex rapidly…

                                                            

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An excerpt from my story

…..Bella   looked around in amazement,the dimension  was phenomenal! She  ducked as something glided over her head, when she looked up she saw an villainous, techno giant  like figure scurrying over to what looked like a secret room.  Cautiously , the techno giant  typed  in a code and the lasers that were guiding the room vanished,letting him collect his gold. Unexpectedly, a hologram appeared  of the alien which said-one swirl of the magical pen freezes time .Bella couldn’t  resist.She immediately swirled   the magical pen in the air BOOM!Everything was still,apart from Bella  ,who went to discover the extraordinary dimension that she found herself in.

“Gold!” Bella shrieked and grabbed as much as she could carry.

Swirl.The pen accidentally turned.Instantly,the techno giant  turned toward Bella ,he saw that she was trying to steal some of his gold-he was furious.

“Quick Bella , this way,”ushered the hologram of the alien.Bella jumped straight into the vortex….

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… As soon she had made her decision, the force of the vortex sucked her in and she was looking around in astonishment : this dimension was an incredible sight. She ducked as an unrecognisable object hung over her head, when she peeked up she noticed a colossal, evil-looking Robo-Rex marching to what seemed like a secret room. Cautiously, the Robo-Rex entered a pin and the door swung open, revealing piles and stacks of coins, allowing him to collect the money.                                                                                                                                                Suddenly, the alien (who was called Zinc) appeared and he said, “One press of the pause button will freeze time”…                                                                                                                                               

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… But by the time she had questioned herself, she has already been sucked in by the force of  the portal.Bella scanned her surroundings in astonishment: the dimension was out of this world!She ducked as something unknown hung over her head.Nervously, she looked up and spotted  a colossal, evil – Robo-Rex  marching to what looked like a secret room. Cautiously, the Robo-Rex put in a password and the wooden door swung open revealing a stash of coins,allowing the Robo-Rex to take his money. Suddenly, the alien (who was called Zinc)floated down and said -” One click of the rewind button everything will freeze.” Bella couldn’t stop thinking about how it would be like.She immediately clicked the remote control.BOOM!Everything stopped,apart from Bella,who began her quest to find the money and take it home. “GOLD!” Bella screamed..

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But by the time she had made up her mind,she had been absorbed into the portal by the powerful energy of the metal cubes.

Coral gazed around in astonishment,the dimension was extrodinary . She dove as something she didn’t  recognize dove   over her head,when she rose her head she saw a giant,evil robot like figure sprinted to whet looked like a treasure chest.Carefully,the giant slid a key into the locket of the chest and the chest flung open the top revealing  piles of diamonds.

Unexpectedly,a teleporter appeared hovering above…

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Alex scanned around in amazement, the dimension was out of this world!  He crouched as something he didn’t recognise swooped over him, when he carefully starred up into the misty fog he saw a sinister, giant like figure stomping his way  to what seemed like a restricted safe. Surreptitiously, the colossus giant coded in a password and the laser rays that were protecting the safe shut down. unexpectedly, a hologram popped up of the emerald, green alien which said-one click of the controller and time will freeze. Alex couldn’t resist the temptation. he immediately pushed the button down BOOM! everything in the realm was frozen except from Alex, who went to search the phenomenal realm that he found himself in.

“diamonds”Alex exclaimed with a  huge smile on his pail face.Alex swiftly, took as many diamonds as he possibly can carry.click! the controller suddenly fell of and smashed open on the scarlet, concrete floor. As soon as the giant was set free,the giant turned towards Alex and saw sparkly,glistening diamonds on his hands-he was furious.                                                “Alex over here its this way”pointing his digital fingers to the swirling hole. Alex[who was frighted] dived into the portal.

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Planning our Sci-Fi story using Padlet

Use the link below to create you innovated story plan using Padlet. While you are typing, remember that the others in the group and Mr L are able to see everything you write. This also means that you could ‘magpie’ some good ideas – but not copy!

Innovated Story Plan

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Hansel and the stick

In 3056, a cold winters evening struck. Hansel was bored as he looked out of his window and saw snowflakes falling to the thick layer of frost. He was called down for dinner. As he slumped down the stairs, a magical swirl of wind appeared and so did a frail, old man.

” Hello young boy.”said the man. He reached into his pocket and pulled out a stick. It looked crumpled but there was something that made it unusual and unique.                                                                                        ” Want this?” asked the man, who was now gleaming with happiness.    “What is it?” questioned Hansel.                                                                  “It’s a magical invention. It will change the future!” squealed the man. He tapped the stick three times and the swirl of wind appeared once more.                                                                                                                “Hansel! Come now for your dinner!” shouted his mother.                        “Uhhh…. wait. Let me finish my homework.” said Hansel, in an unsure way.                                                                                                                The man continued,”If you step into here, it will take you to another dimension.”                                                                                                    That instant, Hansel stepped into the wind and the man followed. He could not believe his eyes : there was chocolate everywhere! The floor was made out of the finest Galaxy path and the fence was candy canes. Hundreds and Thousands were sprinkled everywhere and lollipops were trees.

As they walked down the path, the man began talking to Hansel.              “So this place is incredible, right? But only I have the stick that leads to this world and I can give it to you. Do you want it?”                                    “Yes please.” muttered Hansel as he began to lick the lollipop trees.         “Ok then.” mumbled the old man and he carefully handed the stick to Hansel. Now that the stick was in his arms, it felt like he had been rewarded.As he looked around himself, the stick felt like a treasure.          “By the way, the name of this brilliance is a Chomple. And do NOT give the stick to anybody. Make sure no-one notices it or even takes a peek at it. If it gets stolen, this world will be lost from us. There is no spare Chomple.”                                                                                                      Hearing all of this made the Chomple sound important. Hansel was even more frightened about the fact that he would need to be responsible for any damage caused to the Chomple. Would Hansel be able to handle the challenge…

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Traditional stories

Jack and the Portal

In 2621 on the Planet Zordo, a young but poor boy carefully fixed his droid, which was the only source of income he had left. Whilst his mother was busy, he typed things on the micro tablet (that constantly shut down – especially in the middle of a game).

“Please fix the droid properly this time,” his mother begged. “And when you’ve finished, take it to the market to be sold,” she cried.

“Yes mother,” Jack groaned and nodded as he said it. Quickly, he picked up the droid and raced out of the door before he was shouted at again.

Within a few minutes he was already at the alley way which led to the market, when an old man in rags blocked his way.

“Where are you going with that droid boy?” asked the curious looking old man.

“I intend to sell it at the market, Sir,” Jack said through gritted teeth, feeling angry at being disrupted from his walk.

The peculiar old man examined the droid for a minute then looked back to Jack.

“I will trade your droid for this marvellous stick young man,” he said with an eager look on his face and a twinkle in his eye. Jack stared at the stick for a moment. It was crippled, useless and definitely worth less than the droid.

“Why would I want a good for nothing stick?” he replied, hoping that the man would just leave him alone. The old man was disappointed but persevered, he tried again to persuade Jack to do the trade.

Tap. Tap. Tap.

The sound of the stick was loud as it was knocked against the cobbled ground. “You see?” the elderly man said.

“See what?” asked Jack, more confused than ever.

“The portal, to another dimension.” The old man pointed to his left.

Puzzled, Jack walked over to the mysterious, multi-coloured hole that had appeared in the wall. As Jack figured out what he was looking at, he turned back to the old man and was speechless.

Finally, Jack shrieked, “I’ll take your trade old man!” Jack ran home as fast as he could the moment the old man gave him the stick.

“You’re back already; where’s the money then?” Mother asked.

“I didn’t get as far as the market,” Jack spluttered excitedly, “Because I traded the droid for this magic stick, which is so much better than money!”

Mother clenched her fists as her cheeks burned red, “What do you mean, you traded the droid?” mother bellowed, her cheeks were now a plum shade. “What were you thinking Jack?” she screamed. Jack hastily left the room before his mother exploded with rage, he was determined to see what was in the portal.

Tap. Tap. Tap

Again, an unusual, but incredible, swirling hole appeared right in front of Jack’s eyes. Should I sacrifice my life by going to another dimension? He thought to himself. But by the time he had thought about his decision, he had already been sucked in by the force of the stick. Jack looked around in amazement, the dimension was out of this world!

He ducked as something he didn’t recognise swooped over his head, when he looked up he saw an evil, giant like figure scurrying over to what looked like a secret safe.

Surreptitiously, the giant typed in a code and the lasers that were guarding the safe disappeared, letting him collect his gold. Suddenly, a hologram appeared of the elderly man which said – one tap of the portal stick will freeze time.

Jack couldn’t resist. He immediately tapped the magical stick onto the floor. BOOM! Everything was still, apart from Jack who went to search the extraordinary dimension that he found himself in.

“Gold!” Jack shouted and he grabbed as much as he could carry. Tap. The stick accidently fell and hit the floor. Instantly the giant turned towards Jack, he saw that he was trying to steal some of his gold – he was furious.

“Quick Jack, this way,” ushered the hologram of the old man. Jack jumped straight into the portal hole.

“Jack, get up, it’s time for you to set out for work!” exclaimed mother. Jack slowly peeled his eyes open. “What is this good for nothing stick doing down here?” mother asked. Silence filled the house as Jack took a long look around. Just as he was starting to think that the portal was just an extraordinary dream, he heard his mum shout, “Jack, Jack, GOLD!”

“Coming mother,” Jack shrieked, feeling overjoyed.

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What we done in english

Hello today the year 6 cLass has done some english. Im gonna show you what we have done!

In english we had to write an emotive language  for a charater description. So each tables have there own target sa to use. My table target was 1.Fronted adverbial 2.Relitive Clause and 3.brackets 4.3 actions sentence

We had to use the same name as Miss Murphy idea witch was corol Ocean.

My fav bit in english is when we got to use are targets to level up the words well thats it for now baii.

 

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Character description

Leaning his head on his knees, worn out shoes and ripped clothing. Bullys ran past the lights with laughter and shouting.there were tears going down his red cheeks it was like two rainfalls. he was in a dark hallway and worried to see what would happen next.He heard rats crawling through the hall.He stayed in the hallway because he was petrified of the bullys and stayed there for hours

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